Developmental Feedback for Fiction – Story, Structure, Pacing

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If your story feels “off” but you can’t pinpoint why, I can help.

This is developmental manuscript feedback — not proofreading, not rewriting.

I focus on:

• Structural issues
• Character arcs and motivation
• Plot holes or logic gaps
• Scene-level tension
• Dialogue realism
• Reader engagement

Ideal for:
Indie authors, first-time novelists, and writers preparing for beta readers or submission.

You receive structured written feedback (1–3 pages depending on length).

Pricing:
Up to 2,000 words – $65
2,000–5,000 words – $115
5,000–10,000 words – $195

Reply with word count, genre, and deadline.

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posted: 2026-02-25 20:52

updated: 2026-02-26 12:46

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